term 2 week 8 writing challenge

This week's a have been doing a challenge writing a description who gets the most points win?

here is my description

Here is the photo we had to write a description about.

click here to see my doc

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this week we have been doing a competition here is what I wrote.

I can see lots of shining button in the cockpit.  There are 4 windows in the hot red sun is setting to the west and the moon is coming to the south.

The buttons are shining green gray and blue.

The pilot has a coffee cup that is blue white and green.

The sun is as red as blood.

The moon is as white as paper.