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Wednesday, 8 August 2018

volcano´s

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  1. You have worked very hard on this tricky and technical text Mitchell. Well done. I think the facts you found in the text and on the National Geographic website are really interesting.
    Next time just check that you have a title on your graphs and diagrams so the reader knows what they are, e.g. Sounds a Volcano Makes' . :)

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