I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 17 September 2019
Wednesday, 21 August 2019
Tuesday, 20 August 2019
mitchell's term 3 week 5
can you please give me feedback on how you liked it.
1.On this week’s Doc type the main character(s) in this issue and the pages ,
Owen Simmons, Milly Morris [pg4-5]
2. Type the ISSUE (problem).
Should Milly Morris be allowed to turn the vacant section into a kids-only park?
3. Create a 2 column table of the problem and its consequences.
problem
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consequences.
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Many of the houses in Nite street have very small backyard.
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The kids in nite street can play at the bigger park instead of the small backyards.
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4. Solution - Type who the writer is and what solution they want, e.g. Suzie Long wants Mr & Mrs Fitz to move with their hens to the country.
Milly Morris should be allowed to make a kids only park in the vacant section next door.
5. Go to the question BELOW for the story you are working on and write a full sentence answer to the inference question for the niggle you are working on.
6. Go to the question BELOW for the story you are working on and write a full sentence answer to the CLARIFY question for your text.
Question Numbers 5 & 6 For Each Text
Pages 4 & 5 Owen Simmons
5. Inference Question: What would make the empty section attractive for kids? (pg 5)
Playground with a slide climbing wall and a ramp for scooters and bikes.
6. Clarifying Question: What does Owen mean when he says, ‘It would be an investment for the future?’
The playground will stay there for lots of years.
7. Write 2 BIG questions and their full sentence answer from your text.
(What, Why, Where, When, Who, Which, How.)
[1] What describes the backyard on pg 4
[2] what describes the old people. Write the sentence on pg 5
9. Share your work with Mrs N. Also, put your work on your Blog telling readers what you want feedback on.
Friday, 16 August 2019
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Wednesday, 7 August 2019
term 3 week 3
Create list of all working animals mentioned and what do they do.
- Guide dogs guide dogs walk blind people around.
- assistant dog assistant dogs help people how are blind and deaf.
- Draft horses A draft horses help people with there strengths
- Logging elephants logging elephants help people by lifting logs.
- Dolphins
- Asian elephants
- Horses
- Elephants
- Oxen
- smell dogs
- Dogs
- Monkeys
- Small birds
- Cats
- Guard dogs guard dogs make sure and intruders stay out.
- War elephants
- Homing pigeons
- Mules
- Ponies
- Donkeys
- Bullock
- Working dog
- Camels
- Rabbits rabbits are good for food and their skin.
- Sheep
- Pigeon
Write each vocabulary word and its meaning add a picture.
Oxen a oxen is a strong animal
Harness a harness is some things you hold on to stay on.
Trustworthy trustworthy means
Mines in the sea a mine is a bom in the sea.
Write 5 big questions that can be found in the text
[1] What does a guard dog do as a job. Pg 5
[2] Are oxen slow or fast, strong or weak. Pg 4
[3] how often do people tame wild animals. Pg 3
[4] what is the donkey doing on pg 4.
EA Rate this text out of 10 with a reason.
I rate this text a 9 because I learnt lots about this text.
AA What am I
I am in the war.
I have a tail.
I am black and Brown
I left big things.
I was trained in the military.
I am used for police work now.
I have big ear.
I am a war elephant.
Tuesday, 6 August 2019
Monday, 5 August 2019
Friday, 2 August 2019
about me
This week I have made a screencastify about me.
I hope you like it?
Thursday, 1 August 2019
should kids be allowed to buy their own lunch
Should kids be allowed to go out of school
to buy their own lunch?
to buy their own lunch?
In my opinion kids should be allowed to go out of school to buy
their own lunch.
My first reason is that teachers are allowed to go out of school
and get own lunch so it is not fair on the kids that see them eating.
My second reason is that some kids don't get lunches and need
something to eat because they get out of bed to late and can not
make a lunch at there house.
My last reason is that when it is someones birthday they might go
out for lunch and come back and eat in front of everyone and that
is not fear.
So in my 3 amazing reasons kids should be allowed to go
out of school to buy their own lunch.
their own lunch.
My first reason is that teachers are allowed to go out of school
and get own lunch so it is not fair on the kids that see them eating.
My second reason is that some kids don't get lunches and need
something to eat because they get out of bed to late and can not
make a lunch at there house.
My last reason is that when it is someones birthday they might go
out for lunch and come back and eat in front of everyone and that
is not fear.
So in my 3 amazing reasons kids should be allowed to go
out of school to buy their own lunch.
Tuesday, 23 July 2019
Wednesday, 3 July 2019
Wednesday, 19 June 2019
term 2 week 8 writing challenge
This week's a have been doing a challenge writing a description who gets the most points win?
here is my description
Here is the photo we had to write a description about.
here is my description
Here is the photo we had to write a description about.
Monday, 17 June 2019
Thursday, 13 June 2019
term 2 week 7
this week we have been doing a competition here is what I wrote.
I can see lots of shining button in the cockpit. There are 4 windows in the hot red sun is setting to the west and the moon is coming to the south.
The buttons are shining green gray and blue.
The pilot has a coffee cup that is blue white and green.
The sun is as red as blood.
The moon is as white as paper.
Friday, 31 May 2019
media team selling Christchurch
This week we have been making a google drawings about things that other place do not have.
Monday, 27 May 2019
sandsastles
for writing this week we have been doing descriptions on the beach and sandcastle.
Friday, 3 May 2019
writing
today our task was to choose a genre of writing.
i decided to work with 2 friends.
i chose to write a pick a path.
Check it out.
i decided to work with 2 friends.
i chose to write a pick a path.
Check it out.
Thursday, 2 May 2019
Recount of the holidays
Recount of the holidays
On Saturday the first weekend of the school holidays I went to Kees birthday.
The first game we played was Okdowball it was an average.
It was fun but everyone was cheating.
10 minutes later we had food. I had mostly hot chips.
Finally at 5:30 my mum came and picked me up and i went home.
The next day I was sick and I nearly threw up. I had to go to my mums work.
I was better the next day.
I was feeling pretty happy about the weekend until I got sick.
Friday, 22 March 2019
media team
In the media team we had to do a Screencastify and then use We Video to edit the Screencastify.
Here is my video.
Can you please give me feed back on my Screencastify?
Did you like it and what did you line from me?
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